This is a new author with an interesting way of telling a story. This is a short story and while it is pretty good it does lack in certain ways. The grammar and sentence structure is sometimes awkward along with some spelling issues. The place and time are very nebulous and that makes things unclear. I mean that we cannot be sure if this Earth, another planet, deep in the past or a version of the future. I would also have liked to have a bit more about the victims as well as getting some background on the investigator himself.
I do like the concept of a magical agency that polices the use of black magic. While the mystery this time was a fairly simple one and easily figured I am hopeful that they will become more nuanced as time goes on and the writer becomes more relaxed with his character. I see a lot of room for growth and look forward to what is next.
When Edwin and Marlis Reids are killed by black magic OBDY Wade Falx of Black Dove Yard is sent to find out who committed the crime. The Reids were an adventurous couple who traveled in the nearby forests. When they decided to settle down they built a park for children to help educate them on nature. Then one day out of the blue they were found murdered by dark magic.
Give this a chance.
My rating: ✪✪✪










