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The Curse of the House on Cypress Lane: Black Water- Book 1

While I found aspects of this story enjoyable, it didn’t fully captivate me from the outset. Prior to delving into this full-length novel, I had explored its shorter introductory version and was intrigued enough by the premise to give the complete story a chance, hopeful that it would provide a richer experience. To some extent, I was right; the novel did offer more detailed insights than the initial book, allowing a deeper exploration of the narrative. The plot itself was decent and relatively easy to follow, especially after navigating through some of the filler content that occasionally interrupted the flow.

One of my main critiques lies with the character development. I found the characters frustratingly underdeveloped, feeling more like sketches than fully fleshed-out individuals. They often appeared two-dimensional, primarily defined by their societal roles—husband, wife, etc.—rather than possessing distinct personalities or motivations that would make them feel more relatable. The Sheriff exemplified this issue; he fit snugly into the stereotype of a small-town lawman, embodying the wary protector who distrusts the wealthy outsider and is suspicious of newcomers in general. This characterization struck me as somewhat odd, given that he had lived in the community for many years and should have had a clearer understanding of its history and dynamics.

The language and dialogue used throughout the book effectively complement the characters, providing insights into their personalities in various contexts. However, even with this stylistic strength, it didn’t completely compensate for my desire for more depth in the character arc.

Set in the eerie swamps of Louisiana, the narrative centers around a creature that haunts the cursed house where dark memories linger—a place that the small town of Ocoee has largely chosen to forget. The terrifying truth is that history often has a way of repeating itself, which poses a significant threat to those unaware of the dangers looming just beneath the surface.

In conclusion, I would recommend giving this book a read. While it has its shortcomings, the intriguing premise may resonate with you, allowing you to form your own opinion about the work.

My rating: 💫💫💫

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The Curse of the House on Cypress Lane: Book 0

The book initially didn’t captivate my interest right away, but as I continued reading, it gradually became more engaging as I learned more about the characters and their complex situations. The narrative’s buildup is rather slow, yet it is not lacking in subtleties; the connections between various plot points are evident almost from the outset. What I found intriguing is that this novella claims to be the starting point of a larger narrative, but it feels misleading, as the events that unfold seem to have roots much deeper in the past than what is presented. I wish the author had provided more background about the house and the individuals who played a crucial role in setting everything in motion. As this is my first encounter with this author, I’m curious to explore his storytelling methods further, as every writer has a unique approach to story development.

The central setting, a grand old house at the end of Cypress Lane, is steeped in history, intricately woven with the fabric of the small town of Ocoee, Louisiana. The Cooley family becomes deeply entwined in this enigmatic history, finding themselves in a harrowing fight for their survival, caught in circumstances beyond their control. The protagonist, Owen Cooley, has been unemployed for six months with no promising leads on the horizon. When he receives an unexpected job offer after a rather typical phone interview—one that would necessitate a drastic move for his family—he eagerly seizes the opportunity without really delving into the details about the place he’s being sent to. This situation embodies the classic adage: if something seems too good to be true, it likely warrants a closer examination. Owen certainly should have looked a bit deeper, especially for the sake of his family.

Despite its slow start, the story intrigued me enough that I wanted to continue exploring the mysteries surrounding the house and its inhabitants. While it didn’t evoke outright fear in me, it undeniably carries a pervasive atmosphere of darkness that resonated with my taste. I would certainly recommend this book to those who are in search of a horror read filled with potential and rich narrative threads.

My rating: 🌟🌟🌟🌟

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The Curse of the House on Cypress Lane #0

The Curse of The House on Cypress Lane: Book 0- The Beginning by James Hunt

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


The book didn’t grab me right out of the gate but it got more and more interesting as I got to know the characters and their situation better. While the buildup is slow, it is not exactly subtle. You can pretty much all the connections immediately. This particular book is a novella that purports to be the beginning of things but that is inaccurate because what has been going on obviously began much further in the past than this. But it would have been nice to get some of that background about the house and the people who set things in motion. I have never read this author before and maybe just need to see what his process is for developing stories since everyone’s is slightly different.

The house at the end of Cypress Lane is large and with a history that is entwined with the town of Ocoee, Louisiana. The Cooley family becomes entangled in that history and must fight to stay alive in a situation, not of their making. Owen Cooley has been out of work for the past 6 months with no opportunities in sight. When he is offered a job after a phone interview which would mean a drastic relocation of his family he jumps at the chance without even trying to get any information about the place he is going. This is one of those times when if it’s too good to be true, then you should look behind the curtain. He should have looked for his family’s sake.

This did intrigue me enough to make me want to continue reading about this house and its inhabitants. It did not scare me but it does have an atmosphere of darkness that worked for me. I would recommend it to those who want a horror read with potential.



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If you ever wanted to know what fear and desperation looked like, Owen would tell you to go down to the local unemployment center and look in the eyes of the men and women waiting in line to speak with a clerk. Beyond the bouncing legs, fidgeting fingers, and long exhales riddled with anxiety, you’ll find the worst combination of fear, anger, and hate swirling around their souls. Anger for failing, fear for failing again, and a hate for everything that put them in their situation.

The Curse of the House on Cypress Lane By: James Hunt